William Van Cleave is an exceptionally good teacher. A teacher trainer and educational consultant, he spoke on teaching writing.
One example of what I liked are his exercises on varying sentence structure. Once our students can construct a clear sentence, we often move on to paragraph writing. But if our children don’t know how to vary their sentence structure, they may write boring paragraphs like this:
I like trees. Trees are tall and green. They lose their leaves in the fall. We rake them in piles. [Subject-verb-adjective. Subject-verb-object. Subject-verb-object….]
If your child writes like this, then have a look at the section on ways to vary sentences.
But don’t neglect the other 41 pages of this excellent resource.
Van Cleave is a student of Diana Hanbury King, whose Writing Skills books are among the resources I recommend in Homeschooling Your Struggling Learner. Here’s hoping he publishes this material as a book soon.